Label Help

[BlueStimulator]

I just learned how to use the AVERY site for making labels and made a few prototypes for next years vintage. I have very little artistic skill. So take a look and let me know what they need and what should go away. All opinions are welcome as these are just screen shots of the templates I made.

Label A

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label B for an older water color style

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label C here is another water color this one shows up lighter and greener when printed

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label D this is for the Vio

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label E another old school style

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label F changed it a little

 

[BlueStimulator]

Label G from a photo

 

[BlueStimulator]

FYI I put them all on separate post for a bigger pic

 

[kevinlfifer]

All nice, but those under water views will be hard to read. The crisper art will translate better on printing

 

[Mismost]

I like A....but, I would ditch the Brix, Ph, and TA, most folks don't know what that is and don't care...maybe add a note like "a special blend for family and friends.

You a big fly fisherman? I am an expert at snapping off flies and tangling lines! I look like a spastic break dancer when I fly fish. However, I do love watching a good fly caster, they are just so smooth, like an art form...hope your wine is like that too!

 

[roger80465]

Check your spelling on your Viognier

 

[bkisel]

By looks my pick is Label G but without the Brix, PH and TA. I'd suggest %ABV and date.

Is the name of that fish"Cutthroat"? If not then the label makes no sense to me.

 

[sour_grapes]

I prefer the old-school look. I think it will look nicer against the dark bottle.

 

[BlueStimulator]

Thank you all for the feedback I do know some spelling, capitalization and font errors exist but being dyslexic I have a hard time with Viognier. Spelling, grammar and punctuation are not my strong suits.

Yes I do luv to fly fish and I can catch as many trees as the next guy. My moniker is from my fav fly the rubber legs stimulator and blue came from a Dr I fly fish with who knows I sold the little blue pill years ago.

That is the name of the fish on the label and wild west slope cutthroat trout are my fav fish to catch on a dry fly.

The stonefly hatch is a world famous hatch on the Deschutes River in Oregon. The big trout act like rutting bull elk when the hatch is on. That is where he name Stonefly Viognier came from. I have some pear cider I'm bottling this week and need a fly fishing name for it. So if you have any sugestions let me know. So far I have

Purple Haze Perry

Purple Perril Perry

Both are flies and I am thinking on the Purple Haze as I grew up in Seattle and am a fan of Jimi

Keep it coming let me know which label you like and why, also what you don't like and Why. Thanks again

 

[BlueStimulator]

I prefer the old-school look. I think it will look nicer against the dark bottle.

Which color do you like for the text?

 

[sour_grapes]

Which color do you like for the text?

Closest would be "F", but I think a medium, reddish brown or burgundy would look best.
Maybe like this?
Or perhaps this?

Or even a dark gray, Like this one?